Classic ghost story. I recommend reading with creepy music in the background, such as this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XCKQgJ0Eqlg&t=3477s Written in the style of an audio drama, not a style I've done before but I was inspired by the audiobook I'm listening to. Quite a bit of swearing from our two characters, but I've had issues with dialogue before and I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible
Possibly a prologue for a bigger story, so I'm looking forward to the feedback!