Jim II and the Bowl of Oats

Carrickmannon Primary School, P7
12th December 2024

Jim II was half man half oat. He had 17,000 oats; he had a house made of oats, a car made of oats, and a boat made of oats. He was driving in his bowl of oats, and he met Pie the fish driving in a pie. Jim II had a football in his bowl of oats and Pie started playing football in his bowl. Jim II was very mad and pulled out seven bands of money. 

He said, “Get off the bowl or you’re not getting any moolah!”

Pie said, “I want that money”

Jim II said, “I won’t give you any money, but I will give you a year's supply of oats.”

Jim II was afraid of rice, so Pie pulls out a handful of rice from his pocket and Jim II rolls away. When they were younger, they met at a school for things who weren’t people and there was another student there who was made of rice who Jim was afraid of. 

Pie was then able to play football in his bowl of oats. While Jim II was rolling away, he unlocked his greatest wish to become fully oats. Jim II was going back to his bowl of oats when Pie started shooting rice at him but now that Jim II was fully oats the rice didn’t affect him. 

Jim II needed money but since he was fully oats he could produce oats from his own body, so he went to work in an oat factory selling his oats. The rice on the road came to life and became the size of P7 children with arms and legs. Jim II wanted the money because he wanted a Bugatti because Pie had taken over his bowl of oats but suddenly the rice men started chasing him...