Be Careful What You Wish For

Illustration for Be Careful What You Wish For, written by Wheatfield Primary School, P6Wheatfield Primary School, P6
May 11th 2017

Chapter One

Once upon a time, there was a Kinder Bueno monster called Coco. One day, he was walking outside and he found a dandelion. He blew the dandelion and made a wish.

“I wish for a BEAUTIFUL, yummy chocolate house!” he said. “With smarties on top.”

Just then, he bumped into his best friend, Oreo the Galaxy pug.

“What are you doing here?!” Coco asked. “I thought you lived in space.”

“I just came down because my favourite snacks are down here,” replied Oreo.

Coco brought out a Kinder Egg.

“Bleurgh! I don’t like that,” said Oreo. “I only like Galaxy chocolate.”

Oreo turned around. Suddenly, she saw a chocolate house. It was made out of Galaxy chocolate so Oreo couldn’t help herself.

She started from the ground up. In two seconds, it was gone!

“THAT WAS MY WISH!” cried Coco.

“What? I didn’t know that!” said Oreo.

Suddenly, there was a huge explosion. KABAM!

Oreo turned around and saw that her space ship had blown up in pieces.

“That’s great! That means you can stay with me and eat chocolate!” said Coco.

“No! I need to get home! I need to save all of the planets in the Galaxy. Even the ones that you haven’t discovered yet!” panicked Oreo. When Oreo was running, she saw a dandelion. She picked it up and blew it away. “I WISH I’D NEVER EATEN ALL THAT CHOCOLATE!!!” …